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作诗《误相遇》——笔下此篇误相遇,我与伊人互思追

 

7月10日晚21:30,我在工作的空隙去群里面闲聊了几句,没说多少又聊成诗词大会,即兴而起作了首诗。这几天一直在没日没夜的工作,这件事就忘了,今天翻看电脑发给手机的文件记录看到了,整理一下发出来吧。

写作背景:在工作闲暇时间在群里闲聊与女群管对诗;灵感来源:窗外与桌前触景生情。

《误相遇》诗文

阴空懒月茫甚灰
壶中茹苦更无味
笔下此篇误相遇
我与伊人互思追

续写《更无味》

壶中茹苦茫甚灰
阴空懒月互思追
我与伊人误相遇
笔下此篇更无味

经过

(注:妖子是我,晨影是女群管,其他人发言暂不计)

 

晨影:辛苦最怜天上月,一昔如环,昔昔都成玦。若似月轮终皎洁,不辞冰雪为卿热。无那尘缘容易绝,燕子依然,软踏帘钩说。唱罢秋坟愁未歇,春丛认取双栖蝶。

妖子:感觉这个很绕

妖子:一直背不下来

晨影:若似月轮终皎洁,不辞冰雪为君热

妖子:不是背,从不背,理解到了就能随口就说出来,就是理解了,还是绕。很绕

晨影:纳兰容若的主要是意境

妖子:曲阑深处重相见,匀泪偎人颤。凄凉别后两应同,最是不胜清怨月明中。半生已分孤眠过,山枕檀痕涴。忆来何事最销魂,第一折枝花样画罗裙。

妖子:我知我知

妖子:我承认我是复制的,但是这篇我能随口就说出来

妖子:我们自己作诗吧,谁先来

晨影:你先

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妖子:《误相遇》

阴空懒月茫甚灰
壶中茹苦更无味
笔下此篇误相遇
我与伊人互思追

妖子:该你了,续写

妖子:我给你留的很明显了,调一下顺序就好了
《更无味》
壶中茹苦茫甚灰
阴空懒月互思追
我与伊人误相遇
笔下此篇更无味

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